I gave my synopsis and the first four chapters of my book, to a friend at work. He finally got to sit down and read them during an airplane ride. Of course, when he comes back from vacation, he yells at me (literally), because I left him at the end of chapter 4, with a murder. Last week I finished up chapters 9&10 on book 2, sent them off to mom, and got an email back calling me a brat, among other things. Chapter 10 ends abruptly, with Dawn (Heroine #1) going over the side of a bridge. I gotta say, it kinda felt great to provoke that kind of reaction from two separate people, from two separate books even.